Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense, since the question is about your childhood. Avoid repeating words and self-corrections, and use a clear name for the bike (for example, “a mini bike”). Add one specific detail about what you enjoyed doing with it. Keep the answer to two or three fluent sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a mini bike when I was a child. It was my favourite because it was easy to ride, and I loved practising little drifts with it.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then explain who uses bikes and why. Use the plural form “bikes are,” and say “ride bikes to work” rather than “work with a bike.” Avoid repeated words and give a specific reason, such as convenience or low cost.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they’re affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities where traffic can be heavy.

× In my childhood I I have many bikes.

✓ In my childhood, I had many bikes.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so the past tense is needed. Use had instead of have when describing possession in the past.

× my mini bikes bike

✓ my mini bike

The phrase refers to one bike, so bike should be singular. The repeated use of bikes and bike is also unnecessary.

× the best is my mini bikes bike

✓ the best was my mini bike

The student is talking about a bike from childhood, so was is the appropriate past-tense form of is.

× because that is a very good to good to drive

✓ because it was very good to ride

The original phrase has an incomplete structure: a good needs a noun after it, and the repeated words make the sentence unclear. Use very good to ride for a complete, natural structure. Was also keeps the description in the past.

× I will do the drifts

✓ I used to do drifts

The student is describing a childhood habit, not a future action. Use used to do to describe something done regularly in the past.

× it's too good to drive and my child

✓ It was great to ride when I was a child.

The original ends with my child, which does not complete the intended meaning. Use when I was a child to show when the experience happened, and use was for the past.

× bikes is very popular

✓ Bikes are very popular

Bikes is a plural subject, so it needs the plural verb are, not is.

× many people work with a bike

✓ many people commute by bike

Use by bike to describe the way people travel. With a bike usually means using or possessing a bike, rather than traveling by one.

× go to the our works

✓ go to work

Work does not take the in this expression, and our is not needed. The natural phrase is go to work.

× there it's too good bike

✓ They are very good bikes.

The student is referring to bikes, so use the plural pronoun they rather than it. The verb must also be plural: they are.