Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then explain the reason and how you travelled. Keep the tenses in the past: say “when I was a child,” “walked,” and “rode.” The phrase “or Rd.” is unclear, so use a complete expression such as “or rode my older sister’s bike.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to school, or sometimes I rode my older sister’s bike.

제안: Give a clear reason, but avoid saying “everyone” unless it is literally true. Use the plural “bikes” and correct the verb agreement: “people ride them.” You could also explain that bikes are an affordable way to travel.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially for short journeys.

× I did not have a bike when I am. I was a child.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a childhood experience, so the answer should use the past tense. Use was, not am, and combine the words into one complete sentence.

× My family could not afford one then, so I usually walk to school or Rd. on my older sister's bike.

✓ My family could not afford one then, so I usually walked to school or rode on my older sister's bike.

The sentence describes a past routine, so use the past-tense forms walked and rode. The transcript's Rd. appears to be an incomplete or mistaken form of rode.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because everyone take it and ride affordable ride.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because everyone takes one and rides it; bikes are affordable.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so present-tense verbs describing it take the singular form: takes and rides. Use takes one and rides it to refer clearly to an individual bike.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because everyone take it and ride affordable ride.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because everyone takes one and rides it; bikes are affordable.

The original pronoun it does not clearly agree with the plural noun bikes. Use one to refer to a single bike that each person takes, and it to refer back to that single bike.