Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也补充了父亲买自行车这一具体细节。注意谈过去时要用“had”，而不是“have”；描述过去的感受时可说“I was very happy about it”，不要说“I’m ... happy for that”。此外，“absolutely very”意思重复，选用一个程度副词即可。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a birthday present, and I was really happy because I could ride it around the neighborhood.

제안: 先直接说明自行车在你所在国家或城市是否受欢迎，再清楚说明哪些人常骑、哪些人不常骑。注意“popular”要与复数“bikes”搭配；表达“受孩子欢迎”可用“popular with children”。避免重复“they prefer”，并将“cards”改为“cars”（如果你想表达汽车）。可以用“because”连接原因，并补充一个具体解释。

예시: I think bikes are quite popular with children, but less so with adults in my city. Many adults prefer driving cars because it is more convenient for commuting.

× Yes I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，时间背景是过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。谈论过去发生或存在的事情时，要确保动词使用过去式。

× I can remember I'm absolutely very happy for that.

✓ I can remember that I was very happy about it.

这里回忆的是小时候的感受，所以应使用过去式 was，而不是现在时 am。can remember 可以保留，因为它描述现在仍记得这件事。

× I can remember I'm absolutely very happy for that.

✓ I can remember that I was very happy about it.

表达“为某事感到高兴”时，通常使用 happy about something。这里应说 happy about it，而不是 happy for that。

× Yes, I think it's popular just in children not adults because my city They prefer they prefer cards to go outside.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular only among children, not adults, because people in my city prefer cards when they go out.

这里的代词指代复数名词 bikes，因此应使用 they，而不是 it。选择代词时，要让代词的单复数与它所指代的名词一致。

× Yes, I think it's popular just in children not adults because my city They prefer they prefer cards to go outside.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular only among children, not adults, because people in my city prefer cards when they go out.

表示某事物在某一群体中受欢迎时，通常使用 popular among a group。这里应说 among children，而不是 in children。

× Yes, I think it's popular just in children not adults because my city They prefer they prefer cards to go outside.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular only among children, not adults, because people in my city prefer cards when they go out.

because 后面的 my city They prefer 结构不完整，且主语关系不清楚。可将主语改为 people in my city，并用 because people in my city prefer... 构成完整、清楚的从句。