Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-10-23 12:24:34

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

No I didn't. When I was a child my family couldn't afford 1 so I often brought my back to the park. It was fine but a bit scary because the roads were.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, it is very popular. Everyone.

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총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 38.0

제안: 先直接回答“没有”,再补充家庭当时买不起自行车的原因。注意表达准确:可以说“couldn’t afford one”和“walked to the park”,而不是“brought my back”。最后一句没有说完;请补充道路为什么让你害怕,例如车流量大或没有自行车道。

예시: No, I didn’t. My family couldn’t afford a bike when I was a child, so I usually walked to the park instead. I didn’t mind walking, although the busy roads made me feel a little nervous.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 30.0

제안: 回答内容过于简短,“Everyone”也没有具体说明谁在骑自行车。注意主谓一致:bikes 是复数,应说“They are popular”。可以补充常见的使用人群或用途,并用一个具体原因支撑观点。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute or run errands, especially in crowded cities. They’re convenient and inexpensive, and they’re also a good way to get some exercise.

문법

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× It was fine but a bit scary because the roads were.

✓ It was fine, but a bit scary because the roads were busy.

“because the roads were”中的系动词 were 后缺少补足语,导致从句没有表达完整。可以在 were 后加形容词,例如 busy(繁忙的)或 dangerous(危险的),说明道路的情况。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Yes, it is very popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

这里的 it 指代问题中的 bikes,而 bikes 是复数,因此应使用复数代词 they,并将 is 改为 are。回答时要确保代词的单复数与它所指代的名词一致。

23: Sentence without a verb(句子缺少动词)

× Everyone.

✓ Everyone rides bikes.

“Everyone”只有主语,没有谓语动词,因此不是完整句子。可以补上动词 rides 和宾语 bikes,构成完整表达。

중요 어휘

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Fine— Excellent; Worthy; Impressive; Elegant; Delicate
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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