Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并将“bag”改为“bike”。注意过去经历应使用过去时，例如“when I was a child”和“my parents didn’t let me”。“prevent me from and taking part”结构错误；可改为“didn’t let me ride a bike”。“being MMM in the museum park”意思不清，应删除或换成具体、相关的细节。最后可以简短说明原因或感受，避免表达前后矛盾。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought cycling on busy roads was dangerous, so they didn’t let me ride one. Looking back, I understand why they were concerned.

제안: 开头应直接表明现在自行车是否受欢迎，并注意主谓一致：用“bikes were”而不是“It was”。描述过去时使用“could afford”，并将“seldom families”改为“few families”。“the prices of the car are lower than the post”表达不清，建议明确说汽车价格或出行成本的变化；如果无法确定原因，可以换成自己确定的原因。补充一两个具体细节，并使用“whereas”“because”等连接词，保持回答简洁。

예시: Bikes were more popular in my country in the past because few families could afford a car. These days, fewer people rely on bicycles for everyday travel, as cars and taxis are more accessible. However, bikes are still popular for exercise and short trips.

× No, I didn't have a bag when I'm a child because my parents always prevent me from and taking part in such dangerous activities like riding bicycles or just being MMM in the museum park. I actually appreciate it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bag when I was a child because my parents always prevented me from taking part in such dangerous activities like riding bicycles or just being MMM in the museum park. I actually appreciate it.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时。这里的“I'm”应改为“was”；“prevent”也应改为“prevented”，与过去的时间背景一致。

× No, I didn't have a bag when I'm a child because my parents always prevent me from and taking part in such dangerous activities like riding bicycles or just being MMM in the museum park. I actually appreciate it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bag when I was a child because my parents always prevented me from taking part in such dangerous activities like riding bicycles or just being MMM in the museum park. I actually appreciate it.

“prevent someone from doing something”中的“from”后直接接动名词。“and”在这里多余，应删除。

× It was popular in the past because seldom families can afford the cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

✓ They were popular in the past because few families could afford cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

前文的“bikes”是复数，因此用代词“It”指代不恰当，应改为“They”。

× It was popular in the past because seldom families can afford the cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

✓ They were popular in the past because few families could afford cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

“Seldom”通常放在实义动词前，不能自然地直接放在名词“families”前。这里可改为“few families”，表达“很少有家庭”。

× It was popular in the past because seldom families can afford the cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

✓ They were popular in the past because few families could afford cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

“in the past”表示过去的时间，描述当时的支付能力应使用过去形式“could”，而不是“can”。

× It was popular in the past because seldom families can afford the cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

✓ They were popular in the past because few families could afford cars, but nowadays, hmm, the prices of the car are lower than the post, so most of the families choose to go out by car or just by taxi.

这里的“cars”泛指汽车，并非特定的一些汽车，因此通常不加定冠词“the”。