Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-10-23 02:50:57

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Well I have a bite when I was a child and I love to buy it in the park that opposite for my house with my mums and my brothers.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yeah, bike is 1 type of sport in my country and we can see bike everywhere, such as on the main road in the park or the shopping mall. So that's mean it's popular.

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총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 35.0

제안: Answer directly using the past tense: “I had a bike.” Use “ride” rather than “buy” when talking about using a bike, and say “the park opposite my house.” Add one clear detail about who you rode with. Check word forms such as “mum” and “brothers.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the park opposite my house with my mum and brothers.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 55.0

제안: Give a direct answer, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use the plural “bikes,” and avoid saying that a bike is a type of sport; instead, explain that cycling is popular or that many people use bikes. Correct “that’s mean” to “that means,” and use natural phrases such as “on main roads” and “in parks.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to get around, and you can often see cyclists on main roads and in parks.

문법

5: Past tense issue

× I have a bite when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question refers to the past, and the phrase 'when I was a child' confirms that the action was in the past. Use the past-tense form 'had' instead of 'have.' 'Bite' appears to be a spelling or word-choice error, not a grammar error; 'bike' fits the context.

5: Past tense issue

× I love to buy it in the park.

✓ I loved to buy it in the park.

This describes the student's childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense: 'loved' rather than 'love.' This correction addresses tense only; 'buy' may not express the intended meaning, but that is a word-choice issue.

23: Sentence without a verb

× the park that opposite for my house

✓ the park that is opposite my house

The relative clause 'that opposite for my house' has no verb. Add the linking verb 'is' after 'that' to form a complete clause. The preposition 'for' is also not used in this expression; the standard phrase is 'opposite my house.'

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× opposite for my house

✓ opposite my house

The preposition 'for' is not used after 'opposite' in this meaning. Say 'opposite my house.'

22: Article errors

× bike is 1 type of sport in my country

✓ A bike is one type of sport in my country

A singular countable noun such as 'bike' needs an article when used this way. Use 'a' before 'bike.' The numeral '1' should be written as the word 'one' in ordinary prose.

1: Singular and plural issue

× we can see bike everywhere

✓ we can see bikes everywhere

The sentence refers to bikes generally and says they can be seen in many places. Use the plural noun 'bikes' rather than the singular 'bike.'

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× on the main road in the park or the shopping mall

✓ on the main road, in the park, or in the shopping mall

The definite article is already used correctly before 'main road,' 'park,' and 'shopping mall.' No definite-article correction is needed here; the correction only adds punctuation for clarity.

2: Third person singular issue

× So that's mean it's popular.

✓ So that means it's popular.

The subject 'that' is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb needs the -s ending: 'means.' Use 'that means,' not 'that's mean.'

중요 어휘

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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