Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then explain who gave you the bike and describe one or two clear details. Correct the grammar by saying “My grandfather gave me a bike for my birthday.” Avoid fragments such as “A bike” and “And it was pink,” and replace unclear wording like “with a sparkle” with a specific description. Speak in complete sentences and keep the answer concise.

예시: Yes, I did. My grandfather gave me a pink bicycle for my birthday when I was a child. It had shiny ribbons on the handlebars, which made it feel really special.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a specific observation or reason. Use “riding bikes” rather than “people who ride a bike” to make the sentence more natural, and avoid repeating “actually.” Explain why cycling is beneficial, and finish confidently instead of saying “I don’t know what to say.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. You can often see people cycling to work or riding along the streets in their free time. Cycling is also a convenient way to stay active, especially for older adults who want to exercise gently.

× When I was a child, my grandfather for a gave a gift for my birthday.

✓ When I was a child, my grandfather gave me a bike for my birthday.

The phrase for a is incorrectly placed before the verb gave. Also, gave normally needs to identify the recipient when describing a gift. Use gave me a bike for my birthday. This clearly states who received the gift and what it was.

× A bike.

✓ It was a bike.

A bike is a noun phrase without a verb, so it is not a complete sentence by itself. Add a verb, as in It was a bike, or connect the phrase to the previous sentence: my grandfather gave me a bike for my birthday.