Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlıyorsunuz ve annenizin size ilk bisikletinizi aldığını belirterek bir ayrıntı ekliyorsunuz. Ancak “I had a bike” ve “my first bike” ifadeleri tekrarlı; daha doğal olması için cümleyi kısaltın ve isterseniz bisikletle ilgili kısa bir anı ya da nasıl hissettiğinizi ekleyin. “Uh” gibi dolgu seslerini azaltın.

예시: Yes, I did. My mother bought me my first bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

제안: “No” diyerek soruya yanıt veriyor ve bisiklet kullanımının neden az olduğunu açıklamaya çalışıyorsunuz. Ancak “there isn't any place spare” yerine “there isn't enough space” veya “there are few bike lanes” kullanın; “write box” ifadesi anlaşılmıyor—muhtemelen “ride bikes” demek istediniz. “So” ile başlayan gerekçeyi daha doğal bağlayın, dolgu seslerini azaltın ve ülkenizden ya da şehirlerden somut bir örnek ekleyin.

예시: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. There are few bike lanes, and traffic can be dangerous, especially in busy cities. As a result, many people prefer to travel by car or public transport.

× There isn't any place spare for them.

✓ There isn't any spare space for them.

The adjective spare should come before the noun it describes. Also, space is the natural noun here when talking about room for bikes. Place spare is not idiomatic in this context.

× So, it's dangerous to write box in most of the roads, so we don't usually ride bikes.

✓ So, it's dangerous to ride bikes on most roads, and we don't usually ride bikes.

Use on, not in, when referring to roads as surfaces where people ride. Most roads is more natural than most of the roads when speaking generally. I interpreted write box as ride bikes based on the context.