Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn chưa cung cấp câu trả lời gốc nên chưa thể chấm điểm chính xác. Hãy gửi lại câu trả lời đầy đủ; đồng thời đảm bảo đại từ sở hữu nhất quán, chẳng hạn phân biệt rõ “my bike” và “my mother’s bike”.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight. My mother gave it to me as a birthday present, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra lý do, nhưng cách diễn đạt “the residents are limited in economic resources” chưa tự nhiên; có thể nói “many people want an affordable way to get around”. “Keep the fresh environment” và “for neighboring” cũng chưa đúng ngữ cảnh, và câu đang bị bỏ dở. Hãy dùng từ cụ thể hơn, chẳng hạn “reduce air pollution”, rồi kết thúc bằng một ý hoàn chỉnh.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. They’re an affordable way to get around, especially for short trips. Also, cycling helps reduce air pollution in busy cities.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because the residents are limited in economic resources and they want to keep the fresh environment for neighboring

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because residents have limited economic resources and want to keep the environment fresh for our neighbors.

‘Neighboring’ is an adjective and cannot stand alone here; it needs to modify a noun. Use the noun ‘neighbors’ instead. Also, ‘keep the environment fresh’ is the natural word order when describing the condition you want to maintain.