Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear yes or no, then add one relevant detail. The current response is difficult to understand and does not clearly say whether you had a bike. Use simple, accurate phrases such as “I had a bike” or “I couldn’t ride a bike.”

예시: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it in the park near my home, and I often went cycling with my friends.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then explain why with one or two clear details. Some of your answer suggests that people enjoy travelling around town with friends, but the ideas are unclear and several phrases are unrelated or difficult to understand. Use relevant vocabulary such as “ride bikes,” “traffic,” and “short distances,” and connect your ideas with “because” or “for example.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. They can also enjoy cycling with friends.

× So that's why they like.

✓ So that's why they like bikes.

In this context, like needs an object to identify what people like. Add bikes to complete the sentence and connect it clearly to the question.