Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, of course, I had a back when I was a child and I usually, uh, write a bag to go to school when I was in my middle school because it was really close to my home and that's why I would ride my back. Uh.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, I think so because we have sheer bags along the street. Everyone could use their phone to scan the code on the shear bag and then they can write the bag to where they want to go.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 50.0제안: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意过去的经历要用过去时：用“had a bike”和“rode my bike”，而不是“had a back”或“write a bag”。“when I was in middle school”比“in my middle school”更自然。删掉重复的“because”和句尾的填充词，并控制在两三句内。
예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it to school when I was in middle school. My school was quite close to home, so cycling was a convenient way to get there.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答方向明确，但需要使用准确的词汇：“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”表示共享单车；“ride a bike”表示骑车，不能说“write the bag”。说明共享单车为什么受欢迎，并用连接词组织理由和结果。注意主谓一致和表达自然度，例如用“people can scan a QR code”。
예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes. People can scan a QR code with their phones to unlock one, which is really convenient for short trips. They’re also widely available on city streets, so people can easily ride one to their destination.
문법
× I usually, uh, write a bag to go to school when I was in my middle school.
✓ I usually rode a bike to school when I was in middle school.
句子中的“when I was in middle school”说明说的是过去，因此表示过去习惯的动作应使用过去式“rode”，不能用现在式“write”。这里“write a bag”也不符合“骑车上学”的语境；表达“骑自行车”应说“ride a bike”。建议先根据时间线索确定时态：过去的习惯可用“usually + 动词过去式”，例如“I usually rode …”。
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