Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I had a bike when I was the salt. I used to ride it with my friends. I was a lot of friends. My country is very popular bike bike I am I love it bike because my
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes Yes, bike are very popular in by country because they are convenient and effective for short tasks many people use them to communicate to work or go to the market seat of bicycles and motorcycle full effect shift, easy to park and helpful.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 30.0제안: Answer the question directly, then add one or two clear details. Replace unclear phrases such as “when I was the salt” and “I was a lot of friends” with accurate expressions, and avoid repeating “bike.” You could mention where you rode or what you enjoyed about it. Finish your sentence instead of trailing off.
예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school. I really enjoyed cycling because it was fun and gave me a sense of independence.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 45.0제안: State your opinion clearly and use the correct plural form, “bikes.” Explain that people use them to commute or run errands, and use a linking word such as “because” or “for example” to connect your ideas. Avoid unclear phrases like “communicate to work” and distinguish bicycles from motorcycles. Keep the response to a few complete sentences.
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys. Many people ride them to work or to the market because they are affordable and easy to park. Motorcycles are also common, particularly for longer trips.
문법
× I was a lot of friends.
✓ I had a lot of friends.
The sentence uses was, but was does not express having or possessing friends. Use had to show that you had many friends in the past.
× Yes Yes, bike are very popular
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular
The sentence refers to bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject also requires the plural verb are.
× in by country
✓ in my country
By is a preposition and does not show who the country belongs to. Use the possessive pronoun my before country.
× because they are convenient and effective for short tasks many people use them to communicate to work or go to the market
✓ They are convenient and effective for short trips. Many people use them to commute to work or go to the market.
The original joins two complete thoughts without appropriate punctuation or a conjunction, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the thoughts with a period. Use commute to work to express traveling to work.
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