Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
My mean, yes, because, uh, more people, uh, write a fix fix. It's a bike, uh, and uh, my answer is yes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 5.0제안: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering it. Start with a direct answer, then add a brief detail, such as when you got the bike or where you rode it.
예시: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 20.0제안: Your answer gives a direct opinion, but several pauses and unclear phrases make your meaning difficult to understand. Use the correct verb “ride,” avoid repeating yourself, and give one specific reason or example to support your opinion.
예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people ride them to work or use shared bikes for short trips.
× My mean, yes, because, uh, more people, uh, write a fix fix. It's a bike, uh, and uh, my answer is yes.
✓ I mean, yes, because more people ride bikes. My answer is yes.
Use the subject pronoun I, not the possessive determiner my, before the verb mean. The transcript also appears to contain a possible mishearing in write a fix fix; ride bikes is a clearer phrase in this context, but that change is not classified as a grammar error from the provided list.