Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容切题，也补充了每天骑车上学这一具体细节。注意统一使用过去时：将“own”和“ride”改为“owned”和“rode”。避免重复“when I was”，并去掉口头填充词“uh”，让表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I rode it to school every day, which was a convenient way to get around.

제안: 先直接回答问题，再解释原因。表达“不太流行”时要说清楚是传统自行车还是电动自行车；“our China”“the bicycle way”和“hard to take”不自然，可分别改为“China”“bike lanes”和“difficult to cycle”。避免把人口多直接等同于汽车多，最好补充具体原因，例如交通拥堵、公共交通便利或骑行环境不理想。

예시: Traditional bicycles are less popular in many Chinese cities than they used to be. This is partly because public transport is convenient, and heavy traffic can make cycling less appealing. However, electric bikes are still widely used for short trips.

× Yes, I own a bike when I was, uh, when I was in primary school and I ride it. I rode it to school every day.

✓ Yes, I owned a bike when I was in primary school, and I rode it to school every day.

这段话描述的是小学时期的经历，应使用过去时。own 和 ride 都应改为过去式 owned 和 rode。

× Actually I don't think so, because our China has the large population

✓ Actually, I don't think so, because China has a large population

泛指一个人口众多的国家或群体时，应使用不定冠词 a，而不是定冠词 the。另外，China 是国家名称，前面通常不需要加 our。

× there are lots of cars around the road

✓ there are lots of cars on the roads

表示车辆在道路上行驶或出现时，通常用介词 on，而不是 around。

× so it's hard to to take

✓ so it's hard to take

这里重复使用了两个 to。动词不定式只需要一个 to，删除重复的一个即可。