Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense, and avoid repeating yourself. Say “play” rather than “pray” if you mean spending time with friends. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode your bike or what you enjoyed about it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood to meet and play with my friends after school.

제안: State your opinion clearly, then support it with a specific observation. Use natural phrasing such as “you can see many bicycles” instead of “the many cycles you can see them.” Avoid fillers like “you know?” and clarify the place or time you are referring to.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. In busy areas, you can see many people cycling to work or school, especially during the morning rush hour.

× Yes I have yes I had because I need to go out to pray with my friends when I was elementary school. When I was in elementary school.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike because I needed to go out to pray with my friends when I was in elementary school.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past forms did, had, and needed. Use did to answer the question naturally, and keep the verbs describing that past situation in the past tense.

× Yes I have yes I had because I need to go out to pray with my friends when I was elementary school. When I was in elementary school.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike because I needed to go out to pray with my friends when I was in elementary school.

Use in before elementary school when saying where or during what period you were a student. For example, say I was in elementary school, not I was elementary school.

× Yeah, I think so. So if you go to Avon earlier, the many cycles you can see them You know?

✓ Yeah, I think so. If you go to Avon, you can see many bicycles, you know?

The phrase the many cycles you can see them has an awkward, duplicated structure: the cycles are presented as the topic and then repeated as them. Use a clear subject followed by a verb and object: you can see many bicycles. Use bicycles for the standard term for bikes.