Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering it. Give a direct yes-or-no response first, then add one specific detail, such as when you got the bike or where you rode it. Avoid repeating the question.

예시: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Your answer includes a relevant idea about group cycling, but several phrases are unclear, such as “create group bicycle group” and “for healthy.” Answer the question directly, use a clear reason, and explain the morning rides as an example. You could say “cycling groups” and “to stay healthy.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who want to stay healthy. For example, some people join cycling groups and ride together in the morning. It’s also a convenient way to get around.

× for healthy

✓ to stay healthy

Healthy is an adjective and cannot naturally follow for in this phrase. Use to stay healthy to explain the purpose of cycling.

× they create group bicycle group

✓ they organize a group bicycle ride

Group is a singular count noun and needs an article such as a. The original phrase also repeats group, so use a group bicycle ride for a clear, natural expression.

× and they it's now the day

✓ and it is popular nowadays

The original clause combines they and it's, which creates an incomplete and confusing sentence structure. Use it as the subject when referring to cycling or bikes, and place nowadays at the end to express that something is true currently.