Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответьте от первого лица и прямо на вопрос о собственном опыте. Используйте «I didn’t», а затем добавьте одну конкретную деталь — например, почему у вас не было велосипеда или как вы передвигались в детстве.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it wasn’t safe to ride one on the busy roads near our home.

제안: Начало ответа соответствует вопросу, но заключительная фраза непонятна и содержит неверное употребление слов. Вероятно, вы хотели сказать, что друзья часто ездят на велосипедах: используйте выражение «ride bikes». Развейте мысль одной конкретной причиной или ситуацией.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many of my friends ride their bikes to school or use them to get around the neighbourhood.

× No, he didn't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question asks whether you had a bike, so the answer should use I, not he. Use the pronoun that refers to yourself when answering a question about your own experience.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because my friends often ring a bicycle rated a bicycle.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because my friends often ride bicycles.

The phrase ring a bicycle rated a bicycle does not form a clear grammatical clause. Use ride as the verb for traveling on a bicycle, and remove the extra words. For example, say my friends often ride bicycles.