Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你把问题中的“bike（自行车）”听成了“bank（银行）”，因此没有回答考官的问题。先确认关键词，再直接回答是否有自行车，并补充一两句具体信息。注意说“when you were a child”，child 前需要冠词 a。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

제안: 回答方向正确，也提供了原因和例子，但有明显的听辨、重复和用词问题：“bag bags”应为“bikes”，“comment”应为“convenient”；“because”重复。注意可数名词复数，如“bicycles”和“students”，并使用更自然的表达“commute short distances”。删去重复词后，补充一个具体细节即可。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for short trips because they are affordable and convenient. For example, students often cycle to school, while office workers use bikes to get to nearby workplaces.

× Did you have a bank when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bank when you were a child?

child 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应在 child 前加 a。

× Many people use bicycle to commute a short distance because because they are cheap and comment.

✓ Many people use bicycles to commute a short distance because because they are cheap and comment.

此处泛指人们使用自行车，bicycle 应使用复数 bicycles。也可以说 use a bicycle。

× Many people use bicycle to commute a short distance because because they are cheap and comment.

✓ Many people use bicycle to commute a short distance because they are cheap and comment.

because 重复使用了一次，删除一个即可。表达原因时使用一个 because。

× For example, student often ride to school and office workers cycle to nearby workplace.

✓ For example, students often ride to school and office workers cycle to nearby workplace.

这里是在泛指学生，应使用复数 students。主语是复数时，ride 的形式正确，不需要加 -s。

× For example, student often ride to school and office workers cycle to nearby workplace.

✓ For example, student often ride to school and office workers cycle to a nearby workplace.

workplace 是可数名词单数，前面需要限定词。这里可以在 nearby workplace 前加 a。