Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答开头直接，但后半句有明显的时态错误：“when I was a child”描述过去，应使用“bought”而不是“buy”。另外，题目问的是自行车，回答中的“bag”会让意思变成“包”；请确认并清楚说出“bike”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车的地点。

예시: Yes, definitely. My parents bought me a bike when I was about eight. It was bright red, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

제안: 回答有明确表态，但后续内容因多次使用“bag”而偏离题意；如果你想表达“共享单车”，应说“shared bikes”或“bikes available for rent”。“for a meal for a final meal”表达不清，也没有具体说明自行车为什么受欢迎。建议先直接回答，再用一个具体原因或使用场景支持观点，并减少“umm”和“uh”等停顿词。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. There are shared bikes all over the place, so people can rent one for a short trip. They’re convenient and often cheaper than taking a taxi.

× My parents buy a bag for me when I was a child.

✓ My parents bought a bag for me when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此主句中的动词也应使用一般过去时。“buy”的过去式是“bought”。