Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details. Use “go to the dentist” and “hang out with my friends”; avoid repeating or correcting yourself mid-sentence. Connect the theft to your reaction with a linking word such as “Unfortunately.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the dentist or used it to hang out with my friends. Unfortunately, it was stolen one day, which was really disappointing.

제안: Give a direct answer and explain how people use bikes. Use “ride bikes” or “go cycling,” and replace “membership” with a natural phrase such as “the sense of camaraderie.” Avoid repeating the same idea, and use a linking word like “For example.”

예시: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country. For example, people often form groups and go for rides together at the weekend. They enjoy the fresh air and the sense of camaraderie.

× I usually rode the bike to go to dentist or hang out hung out with my friends, but one day my bike was stolen so it was very disappointing.

✓ I usually rode the bike to go to the dentist or hang out hung out with my friends, but one day my bike was stolen so it was very disappointing.

The expression is go to the dentist, with the definite article the. Use the when referring to this familiar service or visit.

× I usually rode the bike to go to dentist or hang out hung out with my friends, but one day my bike was stolen so it was very disappointing.

✓ I usually rode the bike to go to the dentist or hung out with my friends, but one day my bike was stolen so it was very disappointing.

The answer describes past habits and events, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use hung out, not hang out. Also remove the repeated verb form hung out.

× People love to ride bike so they usually make groups to bike to ride a bike together, they enjoy the atmosphere and membership.

✓ People love to ride bikes, so they usually make groups to bike to ride a bike together, they enjoy the atmosphere and membership.

When talking generally about cycling, use the plural count noun bikes rather than the singular bike without an article.

× People love to ride bike so they usually make groups to bike to ride a bike together, they enjoy the atmosphere and membership.

✓ People love to ride bikes, so they usually form groups to ride bikes together and enjoy the atmosphere and sense of community.

The original sentence repeats the idea of biking and joins clauses unclearly. Use one clear infinitive phrase, to ride bikes together, and connect the final idea with and. Form groups is also the natural verb phrase in this context.