Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答过去的情况，使用过去时，例如“I had a bike”。之后补充一到两个具体细节，比如骑车去哪里、骑车时的感受。注意使用自然的表达，如“ride to school”和“enjoy the scenery”，避免重复“enjoy”，并完成句子。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school, and sometimes I cycled around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a fun way to get some exercise and enjoy the fresh air.

제안: 回答时注意主谓一致：可以说“bikes are popular”。把不清楚的表达换成具体信息，例如说明电动自行车或共享单车很常见，并解释人们为什么使用它们。补充理由时使用“because”或“for example”，并说完整句子。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially electric bikes and shared bikes. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive. For example, you can rent a shared bike near a station and ride it to work or school.

× Yes, I have so that I can remember with a child because I have the right to use a bike to ride to the ski and I can exercise on the road and I can enjoy the umm, enjoy the screen around the outside of the.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

问题询问的是小时候是否有自行车，时间背景是过去，因此回答应使用一般过去时。这里用“Yes, I did”回应过去时的助动词问句；描述过去拥有自行车时用“had”，而不是“have”。

× Yes, I have so that I can remember with a child because I have the right to use a bike to ride to the ski and I can exercise on the road and I can enjoy the umm, enjoy the screen around the outside of the.

✓ I remember having a bike when I was a child.

“remember with a child”中的“with”不能表达“小时候”的意思。可以用“when I was a child”表示“当我还是个孩子时”，也可以用“as a child”表达“作为孩子／小时候”。

× Yes, I think it's very popular because there are many of the automatic bikes in my country and people own respect to the buildings or just cost a one dollar CN¥1 or.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular because there are many automatic bikes in my country, and they cost one dollar.

“one”已经限定了数量，因此金额前不应再加不定冠词“a”。应说“one dollar”，而不是“a one dollar”。此外，在泛指本国有许多自动自行车时，通常说“many automatic bikes”，不需要在“bikes”前加“the”。