Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then give one clear supporting detail. The answer contains several unclear phrases and repetitions, so practise saying the key idea in short, complete sentences. Use the past tense to describe your childhood, such as “I had” and “I loved.”

예시: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was young, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood.

제안: Start with a clear opinion, such as “Yes, I think they are.” Then explain why with one or two specific reasons. Organise your ideas about children and older people into separate clauses, use linking words like “for example” or “also,” and finish your sentences rather than leaving them incomplete.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many children ride them to school because they are convenient and inexpensive. Some older adults also cycle for exercise or to get around nearby areas.

× Yes, of course, whether was a try.

✓ Yes, of course. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original phrase does not form a clear grammatical sentence. The wording is too unclear to correct exactly, so this correction gives a likely complete answer that fits the question.

× I have a bite for a lot for my father.

✓ I had a bike from my father.

The question asks about childhood, so the past tense had is appropriate instead of have. Bike is also the likely intended word in this context; bite means an act of biting.

× I really love it.

✓ I really loved it.

The student is describing a bike they had as a child, so the past tense loved is more consistent with the past-time context.

× Bicycle is very very essential park my like a child and older people.

✓ A bicycle is a very essential part of life for children and older people.

A singular countable noun used generally needs an article, so use A bicycle. The phrase essential part also needs the article a before part.

× Because they don't for the child for a child they this is the tool that they can commute to go to school but and for the older people they don't have the energy they have enough health to

✓ For children, bicycles are a way to commute to school. The sentence about older people is incomplete in the transcript.

The original contains repeated and disconnected phrases, making the sentence structure unclear. Use a complete clause such as For children, bicycles are a way to commute to school. The final thought is cut off, so it cannot be reliably corrected beyond that point.