Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，再补充一个清晰的细节。避免边说边反复改口（如“I I do have I?”），并注意年龄表达应为“when I was six years old”，不要说“a six year years old”。可以说明自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的感受，让回答更具体。

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small blue bike when I was about six, and I used to ride it around the park near my home.

제안: 回答当前情况时要用一般现在时，例如“they are popular”，而不是“it was”。自行车应使用复数“bikes”，并避免重复“good”。“a skill for kids to play with”搭配不自然；可改为说明骑车是一种方便的交通方式或有趣的户外活动，并用具体例子支持观点。

예시: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially among children and people who live in smaller cities. They are an affordable way to get around, and cycling is also a fun way for kids to spend time outdoors.

× Yes, I did. I I do have I? I had a bike when I was a child and maybe when I was a six year years old, yeah.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, maybe when I was six years old, yeah.

表示年龄时，数字大于一通常用“years old”。原句中的“year years”重复且单复数形式错误。可以说“six years old”；如果名词前作定语，则说“a six-year-old child”。

× Yes, I did. I I do have I? I had a bike when I was a child and maybe when I was a six year years old, yeah.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, maybe when I was six years old, yeah.

表示某人几岁时，直接用“be + 数字 + years old”，数字前不加冠词“a”。因此应说“when I was six years old”，不能说“when I was a six years old”。

× Yes, it was and it'll always be popular in my country because it is a good good skill for kids to play with and go outside.

✓ Yes, they are, and they'll always be popular in my country because it is a good good skill for kids to play with and go outside.

问题询问自行车现在是否受欢迎，因此应使用一般现在时“are”，而不是一般过去时“was”。回答一般情况或当前状态时，要让时态与问题保持一致。

× Yes, it was and it'll always be popular in my country because it is a good good skill for kids to play with and go outside.

✓ Yes, they are, and they'll always be popular in my country because it is a good good skill for kids to play with and go outside.

问题中的“bikes”是复数，回答时应使用复数代词“they”，不能用单数代词“it”。注意代词要与所指名词的单复数一致。