Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then explain what you enjoyed doing with your bike. The phrase “because when I felt bored” is incomplete; use a complete clause such as “I rode it whenever I felt bored.” Avoid repeating “my bike” by using “it.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. Whenever I felt bored, I would take it outside and ride around my neighborhood.

제안: Give a clear answer and support it with a specific reason, but avoid making an absolute claim like “nobody can use bikes.” Say “there isn’t much space” rather than “there are not any space,” and avoid the double negative in “nobody cannot.” Use the plural “bikes” when speaking generally.

예시: Bikes aren’t very popular in the crowded parts of Turkey, in my opinion. There isn’t much space for cycling on some roads, and traffic can also make riding uncomfortable. However, people may use bikes more in quieter areas or where there are dedicated cycle lanes.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I liked my bike because when I felt bored.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I liked it because I could ride it when I felt bored.

The clause because when I felt bored does not explain why you liked the bike; it is incomplete as a reason. Add a main clause after because, such as I could ride it. A comma before and also helps separate the two independent clauses.

× I live in Turkey and there are so many people and there are not any space for riding a bike.

✓ I live in Turkey, and there are so many people and there isn't any space for riding a bike.

Use there is, contracted here as there isn't, with the uncountable singular noun space. There are is used with plural nouns. Remember to match the verb in a there is/are construction to the noun that follows it.

× Therefore nobody cannot use bike.

✓ Therefore, nobody can use a bike.

Nobody is already negative, so adding cannot creates a double negative. Use can in this sentence to express that people are able to use bikes. In standard English, avoid combining nobody with another negative such as cannot.

× Therefore nobody cannot use bike.

✓ Therefore, nobody can use a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike when referring to a bike generally. Include an article when using a singular countable noun.