Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Of course I had a bike, but I've barely even used it because I was so afraid of falling down or getting in the way of other people walking or other bikers. Uh, it made me really anxious so I avoided using my bike even though I have some. I have one.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Bikes in my country is nowhere to be popular due to lack of the bike bike roads and also they can go in traffic because most of the car users don't respect bikers and they're also not respected out of the traffic because people don't care if it's a bike Rd. they will just walk over it.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 65.0제안: Beantworte die Frage direkt und fasse die Wiederholungen am Ende zusammen („I have some. I have one.“). Vermeide das Füllwort „Uh“ und formuliere die Gründe etwas flüssiger. Du kannst kurz erklären, ob du später sicherer geworden bist oder noch immer selten fährst.
예시: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I hardly ever rode it because I was afraid of falling or bumping into pedestrians. As a result, I felt quite anxious whenever I got on it. I became more comfortable with cycling as I got older, although I still don’t ride very often.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 55.0제안: Beginne mit einer klaren Antwort, zum Beispiel „No, cycling isn’t very popular in my country.“ Achte auf die Grammatik: „bikes … are“ oder „cycling … is“. Vermeide die Wiederholung „bike bike roads“ und trenne die langen Gedanken in kürzere Sätze. Nenne anschließend konkrete Gründe, etwa fehlende Radwege und unsicheres Verhalten von Autofahrern oder Fußgängern.
예시: No, cycling isn’t very popular in my country. One reason is that there aren’t enough dedicated bike lanes, so cyclists often have to ride in busy traffic. Also, some drivers don’t give cyclists enough space, while pedestrians sometimes walk in the bike lanes. As a result, many people may feel that cycling is unsafe.
문법
× Bikes in my country is nowhere to be popular.
✓ Bikes in my country are not popular.
Bikes is a plural subject, so it requires the plural verb are, not is. Use are with plural subjects. The phrase nowhere to be popular is also not a standard grammatical construction here; not popular expresses the intended meaning clearly.
× due to lack of the bike bike roads
✓ due to a lack of bike roads
Use a lack of when referring to an unspecified shortage. The definite article the is unnecessary because the bike roads have not been identified as a specific group. Remove the repeated bike as well.
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