Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ตอบตรงคำถามได้ แต่ควรใช้ past simple เพราะพูดถึงวัยเด็ก และปรับโครงสร้างให้เป็นธรรมชาติ: ใช้ “I had a bike” แทน “I have one bike” และตัด “at when” ออก สามารถเพิ่มรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เช่น ใช้จักรยานทำอะไร โดยจำกัดคำตอบไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: ตอบคำถามได้ แต่มีวลีที่ไม่เป็นธรรมชาติ เช่น “the bike is the bike style popular” ควรพูดว่า “bikes are popular” และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ “save time” ใช้ linking word เช่น “because” เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผล พร้อมยกตัวอย่างให้ชัดเจนและตรวจการใช้กริยาให้เหมาะสม เช่น “people ride” เมื่อกล่าวถึงพฤติกรรมทั่วไป

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Chile, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because cycling is an affordable way to get around and can save time in heavy traffic.

× Yes, of course I have one bike at when I was about seven years old.

✓ Yes, of course. I had a bike when I was about seven years old.

The question asks about the past, and the phrase when I was about seven years old establishes a past time. Use had, the past tense of have, instead of have.

× Yes, of course I have one bike at when I was about seven years old.

✓ Yes, of course. I had a bike when I was about seven years old.

At is not used before the conjunction when in this sentence. Use when directly to introduce the time clause.

× Yes, of course, from my point of view, the bike is the bike style popular in my country in Chile. We're riding a bike to go to school and go to work it helps to save time and save time.

✓ Yes, of course. In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country, Chile. People ride bikes to school and work, which helps them save time.

The original contains an unclear phrase, the bike style popular, and joins two complete ideas without appropriate punctuation or a linking word. Use a clear sentence structure and connect the final idea with which.

× Yes, of course, from my point of view, the bike is the bike style popular in my country in Chile. We're riding a bike to go to school and go to work it helps to save time and save time.

✓ Yes, of course. In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country, Chile. People ride bikes to school and work, which helps them save time.

The student is describing a general habit, not an action happening at this moment. Use the simple present ride rather than the present progressive we're riding.