Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You answer directly and include a relevant detail about the bike. However, “ride around home” sounds unnatural; say “ride around my neighborhood” or “ride near my house.” You could also add one brief detail about where or when you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, usually with my friends.

제안: Your main point is clear, but correct the grammar: use “cars” rather than “car,” “long distances” rather than “long distance,” and “prefer them” rather than “prefer than.” “Stage” does not fit this context; you may mean “status.” Add a specific reason or example to support your opinion.

예시: No, bicycles aren’t very popular in my country. Cars are much more common because they’re more convenient for long-distance travel, especially in areas with limited public transport. Some people also choose cars for comfort and status.

× Car are much more common because they are seen as more convenient for long distance and many people prefer than for comfort and stage.

✓ Cars are much more common because they are seen as more convenient for long distances, and many people prefer them for comfort and stage.

Use the plural noun Cars because the sentence refers to cars in general. Long distances is also the natural plural form here. In addition, prefer needs an object pronoun such as them; than is used in comparisons, not as the object of prefer.

× It was a blue bike and I used to ride around home.

✓ It was a blue bike, and I used to ride around my home.

When referring to the area around your own house, use the possessive determiner my before home. This makes the intended location clear.