Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“小时候有一辆自行车”，再说明父亲买车的原因。注意讲过去的经历要使用过去时，例如将“want”改为“wanted”；“buy bike”前要加冠词，且“because”引导的原因应与前一句合并，避免句子残缺。可以补充一项具体细节，例如骑车上学需要多长时间。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. My father bought it for me because my school was quite far from home. I used to ride it to school every day, which saved me a lot of time.

제안: 观点明确，但有重复和语法错误：避免连续使用两次“I think”，主语“bikes”要搭配“are”，并将“enjoying enjoying”改为正确表达。“hairy”不适合表达骑车的优点；如果想说“健康”，可用“healthy”。建议用连接词解释自行车为何受欢迎，并给出具体理由，例如方便、经济或适合短途出行。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are a convenient and affordable way to travel, especially for short trips to school or work. Also, many people enjoy cycling because it helps them stay healthy.

× My father bought it for me because I want to buy bike, go to school.

✓ My father bought it for me because I wanted a bike to go to school.

这句话讲述的是童年发生的事情，前面的 bought 和 was 都是过去时，因此 want 应改为过去式 wanted。建议叙述过去经历时，保持相关动词的时态一致。

× My father bought it for me because I want to buy bike, go to school.

✓ My father bought it for me because I wanted a bike to go to school.

bike 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词。这里应在 bike 前加不定冠词 a。

× Because the school is a little far from my home.

✓ The school was a little far from my home.

Because 引导原因状语从句，通常不能单独构成完整句子。这里应去掉 Because，使句子成为完整的独立句。讲述过去的情况时，is 也应改为 was。

× Yes, I think so because I think bikes is a quite hairy way to go to school or maybe go to work and there are so many bikes in our country and many people enjoying enjoying bicycling.

✓ Yes, I think so because I think bikes are a quite hairy way to go to school or maybe go to work, and there are so many bikes in our country and many people enjoying enjoying bicycling.

主语 bikes 是复数，因此谓语动词应使用 are，而不是 is。主语和谓语在人称与数上要保持一致。

× Yes, I think so because I think bikes is a quite hairy way to go to school or maybe go to work and there are so many bikes in our country and many people enjoying enjoying bicycling.

✓ Yes, I think so because I think bikes are a quite hairy way to go to school or maybe go to work, and there are so many bikes in our country and many people enjoy bicycling.

many people 后需要一个作谓语的限定动词；单独使用 enjoying 不能构成完整谓语，因此应改为一般现在时 enjoy。此处描述人们普遍的习惯，用一般现在时更合适。