Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也补充了父亲买自行车的具体经历。注意时态一致：谈童年时用过去时，例如将“I have a bike”改为“I had a bike”，并将“so I can learn”改为“so I could learn”。此外，避免重复使用“bike”，可用代词或更自然的表达替换。

예시: Yes, I did. My father bought me my first bike when I was in primary school so I could learn how to ride. I remember being really excited when I finally managed to ride it on my own.

제안: 观点明确，但要注意主谓一致和名词单复数：“bikes are popular”以及“shared bikes”。“ride on bike”应改为“ride a bike”，“every day in their routine”表达重复且不自然。建议补充一个具体原因或场景，例如共享单车方便人们短途出行。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. Many young people use them for short trips or to get to a nearby subway station because they are convenient and easy to find.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，时间背景是过去，因此要用过去式 had，而不是现在时 have。回答过去经历时，注意让动词时态与问题中的时间保持一致。

× I remember my father bought me a bike when I was in primary school so I can learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I remember my father bought me a bike when I was in primary school so I could learn how to ride a bike.

句子描述的是小学时期发生的事情，表示当时“能够学习”应使用 could，而不是 can。叙述过去的能力或目的时，通常将 can 改为 could。

× Yes, it's very popular in China, especially shared bike.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China, especially shared bikes.

这里泛指中国流行的自行车，尤其是共享单车，通常用复数 bikes。原句中的 it 与复数 bikes 不一致，因此也将主语改为 they。泛指一类事物时，可以使用复数名词。

× Young people normally ride on bike every day in their routine.

✓ Young people normally ride bikes every day as part of their routine.

表示“骑自行车”时，通常说 ride a bike 或 ride bikes，不在 ride 和 bike 之间使用 on。泛指年轻人日常骑车时，可直接使用复数形式 ride bikes。