Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答。先明确回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一个具体细节，例如谁给你买的、你常在哪里骑，或你对那辆自行车的印象。注意说“when you were a child”，child 前需要加 a。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about eight. I often rode it around our neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 你有直接表达观点，也提供了观察到的例子，但句子连接不够自然，且“buscle”应为“bicycle”。可以用“because”连接观点和理由，并具体说明人们骑车的场景；避免连续罗列用途。注意表达“骑自行车”时用“ride a bike”。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them to work or to nearby shops, especially in busy cities. They are convenient and help people avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were child

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

child 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要限定词。这里表示“一个孩子”，应加不定冠词 a。

× Yes, I think so I saw many people ride the buscle to work and to shop and to travel

✓ Yes, I think so. I see many people ride the buscle to work, shop, and travel.

问题询问自行车现在是否受欢迎，回答中描述的是通常能观察到的情况，因此用一般现在时 see 比过去时 saw 更合适。回答中的两个完整句子之间也需要句号，避免逗号拼接或句子粘连。