Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，使用过去时“did”；然后补充你何时骑车、喜欢骑车的原因或具体活动。注意“小时候”说“when I was a child”，“骑自行车”说“ride a bike”，而不是“bike bag”。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. I really enjoyed it because it made me feel independent.

제안: 先明确回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，并用现在时描述普遍情况；再给出具体原因或例子。原回答中“neighbor's daughter or child”“playing back”和“buy me a bag”表达不清，建议改为“children in my neighborhood ride bikes”和“buy me a bike”。讲过去的经历时，注意使用过去时，如“bought”。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many kids ride them in parks or around their neighborhoods. When I was young, I wanted one because my friends had bikes, so I asked my dad to buy me one.

× Yes I have and I like bike bag very much.

✓ Yes, I did, and I liked bikes very much.

问题询问的是你小时候是否有自行车，因此回答应使用一般过去时。这里用 did 回答过去的经历；描述当时喜欢自行车，也应使用 liked。

× Yes I have and I like bike bag very much.

✓ Yes, I did, and I liked bikes very much.

泛指自行车时，bike 通常需要使用复数 bikes。可数名词单数不能在此处单独使用。

× It's my hobby in my child.

✓ It was my hobby when I was a child.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，应使用过去时 was，而不是现在时 is。

× It's my hobby in my child.

✓ It was my hobby when I was a child.

表达“在我小时候”时，不能说 in my child。应使用 when I was a child，表示“当我还是个孩子的时候”。

× Yes it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

问题中的 bikes 是复数，因此回答时应使用复数代词 they，而不是单数代词 it。

× Almost all of my neighbor's daughter or child are all playing back.

✓ Almost all of my neighbors' children are riding bikes.

almost all of 后面指多个孩子，名词应使用复数形式。neighbor 也应改为复数所有格 neighbors'，表示“邻居们的”。

× After all afternoon he buy me a new bag.

✓ After waiting all afternoon, he bought me a new bike.

表达“等了一整个下午之后”时，after 后面可以接动名词 waiting。用 waiting all afternoon 表达等待持续了一整个下午。

× After all afternoon he buy me a new bag.

✓ After waiting all afternoon, he bought me a new bike.

句子叙述过去发生的事情，buy 应改为过去式 bought。