Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了自行车的颜色，但有些表达不自然且重复。注意使用过去时描述童年物品，例如把“is small”改为“was small”；“its color is pink”可简化为“it was pink”。最后可以补充一个具体细节，例如你常骑车去哪里或做什么，让回答更完整。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small pink bike when I was about six. I used to ride it around our neighbourhood with my friends, and I have fond memories of those afternoons.

제안: 回答方向明确，但语法错误和填充词影响了表达流畅度。“there are many people live or work there”应改为“many people live and work in cities”，并避免使用“you know”和“umm”。结尾的“sharing by”不完整，应说“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”。建议按“观点—原因—具体例子”的顺序组织回答。

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes to travel short distances because they are convenient and can help reduce traffic congestion. For example, commuters often ride one from a subway station to their workplace.

× When I was a child, my parents bought a bike for me, and that bike is small and its color is pink.

✓ When I was a child, my parents bought a bike for me, and that bike was small and its color was pink.

句子描述的是童年时的自行车，语境发生在过去，因此应将 is 改为 was，并将 was 用于描述自行车当时的颜色。谈论过去发生或存在的情况时，注意使用一般过去时。

× In China there are many people live or work there.

✓ In China, there are many people who live or work there.

原句中 people 后面直接接 live or work，缺少连接定语从句的关系代词。应加上 who，构成 who live or work there，用来说明这些人的情况。