Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and a relevant detail. Avoid repeating “bike” and joining several ideas with “and.” Use the past tense consistently: “spent,” and say “indoors” rather than “indoor.” Clarify that you were not taught to ride instead of saying your parents “never told” you.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I never learned how to ride one. I usually spent my time playing indoors with toys and dolls, which I enjoyed more than outdoor activities.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes reasons, but make the wording more natural and the supporting details more specific. Use “a convenient means of transport” and “heavy traffic” or “congested roads.” Explain what you mean by government support, or remove the vague final sentence. Link your points smoothly and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in Egypt, especially for short journeys. They’re a convenient way to get around busy streets, and cycling is also environmentally friendly. In some areas, local authorities have encouraged cycling by improving bike lanes.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned how to ride a bike and my parents never told me and I said I spend my time with toys and dolls.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned how to ride one. My parents never told me how to ride, and I spent my time with toys and dolls.

The answer describes the student's childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense. Change spend to spent. Also, say told me how to ride to make clear what the parents did not tell the student.

× I preferred playing indoor rather than learning to cycle outdoors.

✓ I preferred playing indoors rather than learning to cycle outdoors.

Indoor is an adjective, while indoors is the adverb needed to describe where the student preferred to play. Use indoors when describing an activity that takes place inside.

× Bikes are an easy mean of transport for getting around the city, especially during short trips and traffic condition.

✓ Bikes are an easy means of transport for getting around the city, especially for short trips and in heavy traffic.

Means is the correct noun form in the expression a means of transport; mean does not work here. Also, traffic condition is not idiomatic in this context, so use heavy traffic. For clearer parallel phrasing, say for short trips and in heavy traffic.