Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and gives a relevant personal detail. To make it slightly more developed, explain briefly why you did not have a bike as a child, if you can do so truthfully. Keep the response concise and avoid adding unnecessary details.

예시: No, unfortunately, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I got my first one when I was 30 because I wanted a convenient way to get around.

제안: You give a clear initial opinion, but the rest of the answer is difficult to understand because some word choices seem incorrect. If you mean people travel by bike, say “commute by bike” or “cycle”; if you mean the roads are unsafe, say “the roads aren’t suitable for cycling.” Reduce hesitation fillers and add one specific reason or example.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people cycle to work or school because it’s affordable and convenient. However, cycling can be dangerous in some areas because the roads don’t have proper bike lanes.

× I think there are lots of people in my country who are interested in communicating with bike.

✓ I think there are lots of people in my country who are interested in communicating with a bike.

The singular countable noun bike needs an article when used with the preposition with. Use a before bike when referring to an unspecified bike. If you mean traveling by bicycle, a more natural phrase is by bike, but that would change the meaning of communicating.