Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，再补充一到两个具体细节。注意使用过去时，例如把“it makes me very happy”改为“it made me very happy”；避免重复“at that time”，并将“one bike”改为“a bike”。表达经济条件时，可以说“many families couldn’t afford one”，这样更自然、具体。

예시: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was a child, and I was thrilled because it was quite a special gift. At the time, many families in my area couldn’t afford one, so I felt very lucky to have it.

제안: 先明确回答“自行车是否受欢迎”，然后给出清楚的原因或例子。注意说“in my country”，不要说“at our country”；“bikes are becoming more popular”比“back is more and more popular”自然。避免重复“more and more”，并补充具体用途，例如通勤、锻炼或共享单车。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. More people are choosing to cycle because it’s a healthy and environmentally friendly way to get around. For example, some people ride bikes to work or use shared bikes for short trips.

× it makes me very happy

✓ it made me very happy

这段话描述的是童年时发生的事情，前面的动词“bought”也使用了过去时，因此这里应将“makes”改为过去式“made”，保持时态一致。

× at that time the economy at that time it's not a very good area of our country

✓ because my country's economy was not very good at that time

句子描述的是过去的经济状况，应使用过去式“was”，不能使用现在时“it's”。同时，“the economy ... is not a very good area”结构和搭配不自然；可以改为“my country's economy was not very good”。“at that time”重复出现，保留一次即可。

× having a bike for most children is difficult

✓ having a bike was difficult for most children

这里说的是学生童年时期的情况，应使用过去式“was”，而不是现在式“is”。将“for most children”放在句末也能让表达更清楚。

× So I have a bike.

✓ So I had a bike.

句子仍在描述学生小时候的情况，因此应使用过去式“had”，而不是现在式“have”。

× at our country

✓ in our country

表示“在某个国家”，通常使用介词“in”，而不是“at”。

× back is more and more popular

✓ bikes are becoming more and more popular

结合上下文，这里谈论的是自行车，应使用复数主语“bikes”。复数主语要搭配“are”，不能搭配“is”。“becoming more and more popular”也能清楚表达“越来越受欢迎”。

× people think healthy lifestyle is popular and important

✓ people think a healthy lifestyle is popular and important

“lifestyle”是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词。这里可以在“healthy lifestyle”前加不定冠词“a”。

× and we are getting more and more

✓ and the number of people cycling is increasing

“we are getting more and more”没有说明“越来越多”的是什么，表达不完整。可以明确补出数量增长的对象，例如“骑自行车的人数正在增加”（the number of people cycling is increasing）。