Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有多处词语和语法难以理解，因此没有清楚回答是否小时候有自行车。先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车是谁送的、什么时候得到的，以及你如何使用它。注意使用完整句子，并检查关键词的发音和用词。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike for my birthday when I was about seven. I used to ride it to school and play with my friends in the neighborhood.

제안: 你表达了自行车不太受欢迎以及人们更常选择公共交通的观点，但“fear in card”含义不清，且重复较多。开头直接回答后，说明具体原因，例如交通拥堵、道路安全或公共交通便利；使用“because”“so”等连接观点，并避免重复同一意思。

예시: Not really. Many people prefer public transportation because the roads can be busy and cycling may feel unsafe. Also, buses and trains are convenient, especially for people commuting to work.

× So even they want to go outside, they they they want to choose that the public transportation.

✓ So even if they want to go outside, they want to choose public transportation.

这里表达“即使他们想外出”，需要用连词“even if”引导条件让步从句，不能只用“even”。建议用“even if + 主语 + 动词”来表达“即使……”。

× So even they want to go outside, they they they want to choose that the public transportation.

✓ So even if they want to go outside, they want to choose public transportation.

这里泛指“公共交通”这一类交通方式，通常不加定冠词“the”。建议泛指交通方式时直接说“choose public transportation”；只有指特定的公共交通系统时才使用“the”。