Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，并保持过去时态一致，例如用“我小时候没有自行车”。注意正确表达“不会骑自行车”（didn’t know how to ride）和“浪费钱”（a waste of money）。不要把现在的交通方式作为主要理由，除非能说明它与童年经历的关系。补充一两个具体细节，并用 because 或 for example 衔接；回答要完整，避免在句子中途结束。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I never learned how to ride one. I usually walked or took the bus with my parents. Looking back, I wish I had learned, as cycling would have been a fun way to get around.

제안: 先明确回答自行车在你所在国家是否受欢迎，再说明哪些人常骑、哪些人较少骑。避免笼统地说自行车只属于老一代；可以用“在我所在的城市”等限定范围，并提供具体原因或场景，例如交通拥堵、共享单车或通勤距离。注意使用自然表达，如“年轻人通常乘公交或开车”，并避免含义不清的“bike curb”。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my city, especially for short journeys. Many people use shared bikes to get to a bus or subway station because it’s convenient and inexpensive. However, young people often choose public transport or cars for longer commutes.

× I don't have a bike when I am a child because I don't know how to ride a bike

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride a bike.

这句话描述的是学生小时候的情况，应该使用一般过去时。将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”，“am” 改为 “was”，并将 “don't know” 改为 “didn't know”。

× I think it is waste waste money

✓ I think it is a waste of money.

“waste”作名词表示“浪费”时，通常使用固定表达 “a waste of + 名词”。因此需要在 “waste” 前加冠词 “a”，并在 “waste” 和 “money” 之间加 “of”；同时删除重复的 “waste”。

× nowadays people using the car or bus to do everyday transportation

✓ Nowadays, people use cars or buses for everyday transportation.

这里表达的是现在普遍存在的情况，应使用一般现在时。“people using”缺少谓语动词，可改为 “people use”。描述一般性的交通方式时，用复数 “cars or buses” 更自然。

× young people are using bus, not using the bike or using car

✓ Young people are using buses, not bikes or cars.

这里泛指年轻人使用的交通工具，应使用复数形式 “buses”“bikes” 和 “cars”，而不是单数 “bus” 和 “car”。