Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题：用“No, I didn’t”而不是“Now I didn’t”。第二句的“for under GitHurt”表达不清楚，可以改为“fall off and get hurt”。注意过去时态一致，可将“preferred that I played”改成“preferred that I play”或“preferred me to play”。内容已经包含原因，可以再补充一个具体例子，但不必写得太长。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My father thought cycling was too dangerous because I might fall off and get hurt. He preferred me to play with safer toys, such as building blocks.

제안: 回答切题，也给出了价格、便利性和交通状况等理由。不过整段是一个很长的句子，建议拆成两到三句，并使用“For example”和“Also”等连接词。把“for example to the market old to work”改为“for example, to the market or to work”；注意标点和大小写。可以补充一个具体场景，让回答更自然。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my hometown. They’re affordable and convenient for short trips, such as going to the market or commuting to work. Also, many students and workers ride them because traffic is often heavy and parking can be difficult.

× He worried I might for under GitHurt, so he preferred that I played with safer toys instead.

✓ He worried I might fall and get hurt, so he preferred that I played with safer toys instead.

情态动词 might 后面应接动词原形。原句中的 “for under GitHurt” 不是正确的动词结构；根据语境可改为 “fall and get hurt”（摔倒并受伤）。

× Yes, in my home town, many people ride bikes because they are cheap and convenient for short trips for example to the market old to work, also bikes are popular among students and workers since traffic is often heavy and parking is difficult

✓ Yes, in my home town, many people ride bikes because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, for example, to the market or to work. Bikes are also popular among students and workers since traffic is often heavy and parking is difficult.

这里 “old” 应为表示选择关系的连词 “or”，连接 “to the market” 和 “to work”。另外，原句用逗号把两个完整句子直接连接起来，造成句子结构问题；已拆分为两个句子，并将 “also” 放在第二句的谓语部分前，使表达更清楚。

× Yes, in my home town, many people ride bikes because they are cheap and convenient for short trips for example to the market old to work, also bikes are popular among students and workers since traffic is often heavy and parking is difficult

✓ Yes, in my home town, many people ride bikes because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, for example, to the market or to work. Bikes are also popular among students and workers since traffic is often heavy and parking is difficult.

原句包含两个完整的意思，却只用逗号连接，形成逗号拼接句。建议在 “to work” 后用句号断开，再开始新的句子；列举具体例子时，可用逗号将 “for example” 与句子其他部分隔开。