Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-10-20 03:23:37

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Yes I did and I used to go with her like to go on rides but I stopped now.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, absolutely. People in my country adore biking. It's one of their favorite sports.

평가

총점

총점: 5.5유창성과 일관성: 5.5발음: 5.5문법: 5.0어휘: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 45.0

제안: Answer directly, then explain who you rode with and what you did. Avoid the filler phrase “like to,” and use a clear past-tense expression such as “I used to ride.” If you no longer cycle, say “I don’t ride anymore.”

예시: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike with my sister around our neighborhood, but I don’t cycle much anymore.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 75.0

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but “adore biking” sounds slightly unnatural, and biking is not necessarily a sport for everyone. Use a natural phrase such as “cycling is popular,” then add a specific reason or example to develop your answer.

예시: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country. Many people ride bikes to commute or exercise, especially in cities with dedicated bike lanes.

문법

5: Past tense issue

× Yes I did and I used to go with her like to go on rides but I stopped now.

✓ Yes, I did, and I used to go on rides with her, but I don't anymore.

I stopped now mixes a past-tense verb with now, which refers to the present. Use I don't anymore to express that you no longer do this. The revised sentence also places with her next to go on rides for clearer word order.

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