Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer does not address the question, so the examiner cannot tell whether you had a bike. Start with a clear yes or no, then add one relevant detail, such as how you used the bike or who taught you to ride it.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Your answer gives an opinion and a relevant reason, but some phrases are unclear or grammatically incorrect. Say “bikes” rather than “bugs,” use “many people use bikes for delivery work,” and explain what is convenient about them. Add a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason to your opinion.

예시: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among delivery workers. Many people use them because they are convenient for getting around busy streets and making deliveries quickly.

× Temperature to provide.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original is a fragment and does not contain a finite verb that forms a complete answer. A complete response needs a subject and a verb. For example, use I had a bike when I was a child to answer the question in the past tense.

× Yes, definitely bugs are popular in my country and mostly people a useful bike for a delivery work and also uh, it's a very convenient day in my country.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country, and most people use bikes for delivery work. They are also very convenient.

The phrase mostly people a useful bike is missing a main verb and has an incorrect word order. Use most people as the subject and use as the verb. The final clause also needs to refer clearly to bikes; use they are very convenient rather than it's a very convenient day.

× Yes, definitely bugs are popular in my country and mostly people a useful bike for a delivery work and also uh, it's a very convenient day in my country.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country, and most people use bikes for delivery work. They are also very convenient.

Delivery work is an uncountable noun phrase in this context, so it does not take the indefinite article a. Say for delivery work, not for a delivery work. Use articles only when the noun phrase requires them.