Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly first, then explain how you learned to ride. Avoid the unclear phrase “As I did have” and the repetition of “train a lot” and “practiced a lot.” Use past-tense verbs consistently, such as “practised” and “encouraged,” and give one specific detail about the bike or your practice.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my parents gave it to me as a birthday present. At first, I found it difficult to balance, so I practised in our neighbourhood with my parents' help. I learned to ride it after a few days.

제안: Your opening answers the question clearly, but the supporting point is difficult to understand. Use a natural phrase such as “take part in cycling competitions,” and explain whether you mean cycling is popular for commuting, exercise, or racing. Add a specific example and use a linking word to connect it to your opinion.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for exercise and short trips. For example, I often see people cycling in parks and along rivers at the weekend. Some also take part in local cycling races, which attract a lot of spectators.

× I train a lot like I practiced a lot to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I trained a lot, practicing to learn how to ride a bike.

The student is describing events that happened in childhood, so the verb train should be in the past tense: trained. Keep verbs describing these past events in the past tense.

× I've seen a lot of people having bikes competition and they consider it as the most important race in their life.

✓ I've seen a lot of people at bike competitions, and they consider them the most important races in their lives.

Bike is used as a noun modifier, so the phrase is bike competitions, not bikes competition. Because the sentence refers to multiple competitions and people, use the plural pronouns and nouns them, races, and lives. Check that pronouns and nouns agree in number.