Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give one or two clear details about the bike and why you liked it. Use natural phrases such as “at that age,” “a six-speed system,” and “off-road riding.” Avoid repeating words, and finish your final thought rather than ending mid-sentence.

예시: Yes, I had a Hercules Turbo Rider when I was a child. It was a six-speed bike, and I especially liked riding it off-road. The gears were easy to change, so it was fun and comfortable to ride.

제안: Give a clear answer and explain who rides bikes and why. The response shifts between “bikes” and “motorcycles,” so clarify which you mean. Use a specific age range, avoid unclear wording such as “experience with Nubi,” and complete your final sentence. Link your reason with “because” or “for example.”

예시: Yes, motorcycles are popular in my country, especially among teenagers and young adults. Many people start riding them when they are old enough to get a licence. They enjoy the independence and excitement, and motorcycles are also a convenient way to get around.

× It's an amazing bike for a kid in that age.

✓ It was an amazing bike for a kid in that age.

The student is describing a bike they had as a child, so the past tense was is appropriate instead of the present tense is.

× It's an amazing bike for a kid in that age.

✓ It was an amazing bike for a kid at that age.

Use at with age when referring to the period of life someone was in. The natural phrase is at that age, not in that age.

× At the age of sixteen to twenty most of the kids or teenagers like to have or ride the different types of motorcycles and bikes in our country.

✓ Between the ages of sixteen and twenty, most of the kids or teenagers like to have or ride the different types of motorcycles and bikes in our country.

Use between with a range that has two endpoints, and connect those endpoints with and. The natural expression is between the ages of sixteen and twenty.

× At the age of sixteen to twenty most of the kids or teenagers like to have or ride the different types of motorcycles and bikes in our country.

✓ At the age of sixteen to twenty, most of the kids or teenagers like to have or ride different types of motorcycles and bikes in our country.

The sentence refers generally to types of motorcycles and bikes, not to specific types already identified. In this general meaning, omit the definite article the before different types.

× In our country it was one it is one of the best experience with Nubi for kids.

✓ In our country, it is one of the best experiences with Nubi for kids.

The student is making a general statement about the present, so use is rather than was. Remove the false start and keep the verb in the present tense.

× In our country it was one it is one of the best experience with Nubi for kids.

✓ In our country, it is one of the best experiences with Nubi for kids.

After one of the, use a plural noun because one item is being selected from a group. Change experience to experiences.

× The excitement is like we can't express in it our words.

✓ We can't express the excitement in words.

The pronoun it is incorrectly placed in the phrase in it our words. Use the excitement as the object of express, and say express something in words.