Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有清楚说明小时候是否有自行车，且存在明显的词汇和语法问题（如“have”应使用过去式“had”，“I were”应为“I was”）。请先直接回答问题，再补充自行车的颜色或是谁送的；注意使用完整句子，并避免不确定的填充表达。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was white, and my father gave it to me as a birthday present. I loved riding it around my neighbourhood.

제안: 回答的理由较充分，也使用了“because”和“For example”，但“plants”与后文语境不符，应为“bikes”。请补完最后一句，并将并列内容表达得更简洁自然；例如说明城市里常见的骑车人或自行车道。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people ride them to work, school, or the market. For example, you can see lots of cyclists on the roads in my city during the morning rush hour.

× I have a break when I were a child.

✓ I had a break when I were a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，应该使用一般过去时。这里的 have 应改为 had。

× I have a break when I were a child.

✓ I have a break when I was a child.

主语是第一人称单数 I，be 动词过去式应使用 was，而不是 were。