Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也说明了父母买自行车的原因。注意叙述过去的经历时要统一使用过去时：将“buy”改为“bought”，“want”改为“wanted”。表达“保持平衡”时用“keep my balance”；“when I am cycling”可简化为“while riding it”，听起来更自然。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me because they wanted me to learn how to ride and keep my balance.

제안: 开头直接回答了问题，并提到了共享单车，但“all around the city”和“everywhere”意思重复。最后一句的“transform from one place to another”用词不当，建议改为“get from one place to another”或“get around”。还可以补充一个具体原因，例如共享单车方便短途出行。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes because they are easy to find and convenient for short trips. They’re also a practical way to avoid traffic.

× Yes, when I was young my parents buy a bike for me and want me to learn how to keep balance when I am cycling.

✓ Yes, when I was young, my parents bought a bike for me and wanted me to learn how to keep my balance while cycling.

句子描述的是小时候发生的事情，因此谓语动词应使用一般过去时。buy 的过去式是 bought，want 的过去式是 wanted。这里将“学会骑车时保持平衡”作为过去的经历来表达，所以把 when I am cycling 改为 while cycling，使时间表达与上下文一致。