Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Did you help back when you were a child?
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
A single pack is very popular because it is so healthy and it is convenient
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 5.0제안: Your answer does not address whether you had a bike, and it is unclear what “help back” means. Answer the question directly with “Yes” or “No,” then add one relevant detail, such as when you rode it or who taught you.
예시: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it, and I used to cycle around the park near my home.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 45.0제안: You give a clear opinion and relevant reasons, but “a single pack” is unclear and the pronoun “it” does not clearly refer to bikes. Use a specific phrase such as “cycling” or “bikes,” and add a concrete example to support your answer.
예시: Yes, I think cycling is quite popular in my country because it is healthy and convenient. For example, many people ride bikes to work or use them for exercise in local parks.