Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문을 그대로 반복했을 뿐 답변하지 않아 질문에 직접 응답하는 기본 구조가 부족합니다. 어릴 때 자전거가 있었는지 먼저 분명히 답하고, 있었다면 언제 탔는지나 누구와 탔는지 같은 구체적인 내용을 덧붙여 보세요.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: 자전거가 인기 있다는 의견을 제시하고 개인적인 선호도도 밝혔지만, “bike for having time with family”는 부자연스러운 표현입니다. “ride bikes to spend time with their families”처럼 말하고, 통근이나 여가 활동 중 하나를 구체적인 예로 설명해 보세요. 문장을 연결어로 나누면 답변이 더 명확하고 자연스럽습니다.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people cycle to work, while others ride bikes with their families at the weekend. I enjoy cycling too because it’s a fun way to spend time outdoors.

× Yeah, a lot of people ride bikes to work and they bike for having time with family and I personally like to bike.

✓ Yeah, a lot of people ride bikes to work, and they bike to spend time with their families. I personally like to bike, too.

Use to + base verb to express purpose. For having time is not the appropriate construction here; say to spend time. Breaking the sentence into two parts also makes the ideas clearer.