Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently: say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I don’t have bike.” Avoid repeating the same idea, and replace “write the bicycles” with the intended verb, such as “ride a bike.” Add one clear detail about whose bike you used or where you rode it.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike of my own when I was a child. However, I sometimes borrowed my friends’ bikes and rode them around our neighborhood.

제안: Give a clear yes-or-no answer first, and use the plural form “bikes” with the correct verb: “bikes are popular.” Avoid repeating “although,” and complete your final idea instead of ending with “easy to.” Support your opinion with one specific reason or example, such as affordability or convenience for short trips.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Although traffic can make cycling difficult, bikes are affordable and convenient for short journeys.

× No, I don't have bike when I was younger because I used to.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was younger.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past form didn't have rather than don't have. The phrase because I used to is incomplete because used to needs a following verb.

× No, I don't have bike when I was younger because I used to.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was younger.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike when referring to any bike.

× Although I used to write the bicycles but I don't have any.

✓ Although I used to write the bicycles, I didn't have any.

Although already introduces a contrast, so do not use but in the same clause. Use a comma after the although clause. The past-tense verb didn't also matches the past context.

× Bike are the popular in my countries.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country.

Use the plural form bikes when speaking generally about bikes. Country should be singular because the answer refers to one country.

× Bike are the popular in my countries.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country.

The plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are. The corrected subject and verb agree in number.

× Bike are the popular in my countries.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country.

Do not use the before popular when making a general statement about bikes. The adjective popular does not need a definite article here.

× Although it is hard to manage, but it is, although it is hard to manage, people find it convenient to use and easily accessible and easy to.

✓ Although bikes can be hard to manage, people find them convenient to use, easily accessible, and easy to ride.

Although already marks the contrast, so but is unnecessary. Avoid repeating the although clause, and complete the final phrase easy to with a verb.

× People find it convenient to use and easily accessible and easy to.

✓ People find them convenient to use, easily accessible, and easy to ride.

The pronoun refers to bikes, which is plural, so use them rather than it. The phrase easy to also needs a verb to complete the meaning.