Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Em trả lời trực tiếp nhưng câu sau khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Vì câu hỏi nói về quá khứ, hãy dùng thì quá khứ đơn: “I had”, không dùng “I have”. Không dùng “I were” trong cấu trúc này; hãy nói “when I was a child”. Em có thể bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe hoặc việc em thường làm với nó.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

제안: Em có nêu lý do, nhưng một số cụm từ chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Dùng “every child” hoặc “many children” thay cho “every children”, và nói “ride a bike”. Thay “it means transport” bằng cách diễn đạt rõ hơn như “bikes are a common means of transport”. Câu “Whole people can do exercise” chưa rõ nghĩa; có thể nói “Many people also ride bikes for exercise”. Hãy nối các ý bằng “because” hoặc “also”.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them to school because they are an affordable and convenient means of transport. Adults also cycle in the evening to get some exercise.

× Yes, absolutely. I have a bike when I were on all those.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Use was with the subject I. The phrase on all those is unclear; child fits the context of the question.

× Yes, absolutely, because every children in my country usually ride bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Whole people can do exercise in the evening.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because every child in my country usually ride bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Whole people can do exercise in the evening.

Every is followed by a singular noun, so children should be child. Use a singular noun after every.

× Yes, absolutely, because every children in my country usually ride bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Whole people can do exercise in the evening.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because every children in my country usually rides bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Whole people can do exercise in the evening.

The subject every child is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular ending: rides.

× Yes, absolutely, because every children in my country usually ride bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Whole people can do exercise in the evening.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because every children in my country usually ride a bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Whole people can do exercise in the evening.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when speaking about riding one bike in general.

× Yes, absolutely, because every children in my country usually ride bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Whole people can do exercise in the evening.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because every children in my country usually ride bike to school when they are small and it means transport. Everyone can do exercise in the evening.

Whole people is not the appropriate quantifier for referring to all people in general. Use everyone to mean all people.