Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答童年时是否有自行车，再补充具体原因或相关经历。注意“before”和“yet”不要重复使用；“try one it”需要拆成两个句子，并用连接词衔接。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I’ve never learned how to ride one, but I’d like to try because cycling looks fun and is a convenient way to get around.

제안: 先清楚回答自行车是否受欢迎，然后给出一个具体、合理的原因。避免同时使用“because”和“since”；“traffic jump”及“bikes really walk in here”表达不自然，可以改为“heavy traffic”和“people often ride bicycles”。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them because the roads are often congested, and cycling can be a convenient way to travel short distances.

× I haven't tried biking before yet, but I would like to try one it looks interesting and it is convenient if I go somewhere

✓ I haven't tried biking before, but I would like to try it. It looks interesting, and it would be convenient if I went somewhere.

原句中“try one”后面直接接“It looks...”形成逗号拼接式的句子结构错误，两个完整句子之间需要用句号、分号或合适的连词连接。另外，“before yet”语义重复，删去“yet”即可。

× I would say yes it is popular in my country because since there's a lot of traffic jump, bikes really walk in here

✓ I would say yes, they are popular in my country because there's a lot of traffic jump; bikes really walk in here.

“bikes”是复数名词，后文应使用复数代词“they”，并搭配“are”，不能用单数代词“it”。

× I would say yes it is popular in my country because since there's a lot of traffic jump, bikes really walk in here

✓ I would say yes, it is popular in my country because there's a lot of traffic jump; bikes really walk in here.

“because”和“since”都可以引导原因状语从句，不能在这里同时使用。保留其中一个即可，例如使用“because”。