Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add one specific detail. Avoid repeating “usually,” and use the more natural phrase “when I was a child” rather than “in my childhood.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: Your answer gives relevant reasons and examples, but the second sentence is too long. Use “popular” or “common” instead of “famous,” and split the ideas with a linking phrase such as “For example.”

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in my village. They’re affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, people often ride them to the market or to school, and cycling also helps them stay active.

× Yeah, I had a bike in my childhood and I used to enjoy riding it across my neighborhood usually.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike during my childhood and I used to enjoy riding it across my neighborhood usually.

Use during my childhood rather than in my childhood in this sentence. During refers to the period of time when you were a child. You could also say as a child: I had a bike as a child.